Friday 19 April 2013

Four Squares And Microsoft Word

The past couple of weeks R has been using Microsoft Word to make a 4 square and to write his essay piece. Using the computer has been fun for him and he can quickly transfer information from the 4 square to the essay using cut and paste. Here are two great pieces he wrote with minimal assistance.

Australian museum 4 square:

To start with

Dinosaurs

·      Fossils
·      Film
·      Coprolites

Also

Planet and Minerals

·      Crystals
·      Rocks
·      Map


The Australian Museum is great.

As well as

Skeletons

·      Human skeleton
·      Human on a bike
·      Giraffe

In short the Australian Museum is great because there are dinosaurs, minerals and skeletons.

Australian museum essay:

The Australian Museum is great.

To start with there are dinosaurs bones. There are lots of fossils in the museum. There’s a dinosaur film, with lots of dinosaurs and one gets eaten. Coprolites are in the Australian Museum; and they are fossilised dinosaur poos.

Also there is a gallery called Planet of Minerals. There are lots of shiny crystals. There are rocks from the Moon. There is a map of where crystals and rocks are found.

As well as Dinosaurs and Planet of Minerals there are lots of skeletons. There is a human skeleton reading the news in a rocking chair. There is a human skeleton riding a bike. The museum has a skeleton of a giraffe.

In short the Australian Museum is great because there are dinosaurs, minerals and skeletons.  


 Restaurant review 4 square:

First

Food

·        Joey Sirloin and  chips
·        Bolognese
·        Ice Cream
  
Also

Drinks

·        Wine
·        Beer  
·        Tea

The Steak House is great

In addition

Service

·        Colouring
·        Quick
·        Nice
Last of all the Steak House is great because there’s excellent food, nice drinks and good service.


Restaurant review essay:


The Steak House is great.

First, the food is good. The Joey Sirloin and chips is for kids, it’s big! The Bolognese is nice and tomatoey. There is lovely chocolate ice cream.

Also there are pleasant drinks.  They have lots of different red and white wines. VB beer comes in glass bottles. There are different kinds of tea you can have after the meal.

In addition the service is brilliant. The kids get a colouring as soon as they go in. You get the food quickly. The waiters and waitresses are polite.

Last of all the Steak House is great because there’s excellent food, nice drinks and good service. 

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